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Jamal Robinson's avatar

This was gorgeous piece 🌹

There are a handful of lines that spoke to me but I see myself most in this one:

"I will not, cannot be your vacation from you..."

I remember seeking comfort from my internal turmoil in this way. It was only after failing to access it and being forced to be with myself that I came to understand how little care there was in this type of pursuit.

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Ramona McCloskey's avatar

"what you are looking for,

searching, and yearning for

is a lifeline, like heritage, lineage, and family.

what you are looking for is the ‘I’ that sits, stands and lays,

nestled and held.

what you are looking for is intimacy."

What a beautiful, hard-hitting poem this is in a world of alienation where so many are now trying to find a different way of being! And then you concluded it with some quintessential Audrey Lorde... Thank you.

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Harneek Chawla's avatar

This is so beautiful 💚💚

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Simone Keelah's avatar

This is pure magic ❣️

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Mariah Maddox's avatar

Breathtaking. This is lyrical, and so full of deep wisdom.

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Kae's avatar

I’ve rewritten my comment many times over. I’m blown away but this masterful piece of art.

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Kwaku's avatar

Absolute fire

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